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Thin Air

Thin Air can be ordered from the following sites ...  
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ISBN 0764223984

Chapter One Excerpt    

    From his position sitting on a tree stump at the edge of deep woods, Doyle saw blue smoke rise in a transparent tower from the chimney of the small home. Though some distance away, Doyle saw the house in clear detail. Brown siding, white trim, long narrow driveway, neat lawn. The house reflected simple country living at its best. He noticed lights glowing toward the back, the part he guessed to be the kitchen. And as he watched, the door to the back porch opened and a man exited, crossing the yard to open the driver's door of a car parked in the driveway. Though Doyle could not hear, he knew from the exhaust rising behind the car, that the man had started the engine. Doyle saw him climb out and begin scraping heavy frost from the car windows with a long handled scraper. 
    Doyle shivered as he watched, aware that winter pressed eagerly upon the heels of fall. He turned up his collar and deliberately moved his gaze away. His half-shepherd, half-mutt dog had managed to invite himself into a nearby pasture, evidently hoping to torment a horse grazing peacefully on the last bits of a hay bale. So far the horse paid no attention to the dog. Still, Doyle worried that barking might draw the attention of the man scraping his car windows in the distance. Doyle felt the familiar squeeze of fear in his chest, and he wondered for a desperate moment how he might call the dog without distracting the man. Dennis Doyle had chosen this stump carefully, confident that he could watch from here without being observed. But, one bark would change all that. Doyle's breath came faster, and little puffs of warm cloud seemed to hang in the air around his face. He had no desire to be seen.
    Just then the door of the house opened again, and a woman clad in a pale blue bathrobe stepped out the back door. Holding the robe closed with one hand, she descended the steps to the yard. With her other hand she carried a commuter mug full of steaming liquid. Doyle saw the morning sun glint off the stainless steel mug, and watched intently as she crossed the driveway and handed the drink to the man. He wrapped one arm around her shoulder and squeezed lightly. Then she turned her face to him and they kissed, a gentle kiss that seemed to hang for a long time in the silent, cold air. Doyle turned away, disgusted.
    Where had that stupid dog gone now?
    Doyle spotted him, lying peacefully beneath the grazing horse, his soft brown dog-snout resting on his front paws - as if every dog in the world preferred to nap beneath a grazing quarter horse. Doyle stifled an urge to whistle. 
    Grunting, he turned his attention to the edge of the pavement. Only fifty feet from this stump, civilization began. 
    Asphalt. Roads. People. His let his gaze trace the edge of the road where black top met gravel. How long had it been since he had allowed his own feet to touch pavement? He did not know. Could not guess. Doyle had stopped keeping track of time, long years ago. Why would he care about time, or years? He wanted only to live out his own life. 
    Lately, Doyle's allotment of years had lasted far too long.
    Movement in the driveway caught Doyle's attention. The small car backed out slowly, pulled into the street, changed direction, and started down the road. As the woman waved, the white import accelerated. She would be alone now, he knew. 
    Doyle waited until her back door closed and then whistled. Immediately, the dog's ears pricked up, and his head rose. Without hesitation, the dog trotted away from the horse, back under the fence and across the edge of pavement to Doyle's side. Sitting attentively beside him, the dog slid his snout onto Doyle's pantleg. With clear determination the dog eased his nose under the palm of Doyle's hand. Content, the dog waited, watching his master with longing expression and attentive, deep brown eyes. Doyle's hand did not move. He did not pet the dog, or nor did he caress the soft black-brown fur. Instead, keeping his eyes on the roadway, he allowed himself only the fleeting pleasure of motionless touch. 
    The sound of an approaching vehicle caught Doyle's attention. His body stiffened involuntarily, until the vehicle came into view and he recognized the soft gray-green Jeep-Cherokee. Without slowing, the jeep turned a tight circle along the edge of the pavement, until it faced away from Doyle and stopped. Its rear cargo door hung just over the edge of the road. The driver's door opened, and a lean, gray-haired man climbed out of the driver's seat. He walked deliberately toward the gravel beside the road and stood waiting, his hands on his hips.
    Doyle sighed, took a deep breath and unfolded himself from the stump. 
    "You here?" The visitor called, gazing directly at Doyle, yet not seeing him.
    "I'm here." Doyle moved out from the cover of a giant cedar. His right knee ached from sitting so long in the cold morning air. As always, it took a few steps before the painful limping subsided.
    The man smiled and walked through the grass toward him. "Got anything?"
    "Just one."
    He stepped closer. "A box?"
    "Yep." Doyle dropped his green canvas rucksack onto the grass-covered ground, and opened the end. Without taking his eyes from the man before him, he bent down and brought out the box. Before it had fully emerged, the tall man had both hands out, eager to receive the treasure.
    "It's beautiful," he said, running his index finger along one corner. 
    Tiny dovetails no larger than the smallest fingernail on a woman's hand lined up perfectly along the smooth edge. The man held the box up, gazing at the lower surface. Four perfectly shaped feet had been carved in one piece with the bottom. He brought it down, and removed the fitted top. The inside of the box, like the outside, betrayed the same attention to detail as the outside. "You've outdone yourself, Doyle," he said, his voice awestruck. "It's one of your best."
    Doyle shrugged. "How much?"
    "Forty?"
    Doyle nodded, agreeing. Suddenly uncomfortable, he glanced once around the edge of the woods, across the pasture to the house. He had been down too long. He needed to be away, back into the mountains. Alone.
    Reading his glance, the lean man asked, "Supplies?"
    Doyle nodded and reached into his pants pocket. Removing a battered sheet of paper, he handed it to the driver. Tiny frayed holes ran along the edge where he had torn it from his spiral notebook.
    "I've got the other stuff in the car." The man pointed to the jeep with his thumb.
    "Good."
    The two men walked together toward the Jeep, Doyle stopping several steps away from the car. The tall man held the box against his side as he used a car key to open the rear cargo door. Carefully, he wrapped the box in newspaper and tucked it into a side compartment. "I think I brought everything you asked for. All the usual supplies. I put the extra money in an envelope on top." He picked up a cardboard liquor box and held it out to Doyle.
    Doyle snatched the envelope and placed it on the rear deck of the car. "You keep the money. I got no use for money," he said, nodding toward the mountain. He took the box with both arms. "Thanks." 
    "I shouldn't keep your money," the man began. He bent to pick up the envelope and turned back holding it out, "You…"
    But both Doyle and the dog had disappeared

 

 
 

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